It isthestory of agirl who is only18 years old. She decidesto leavehome because her parentsdid not understand her..She woke upearly,when herparents were stillsnoringandwrotea farewell note, she tookthelittlemoneyshehad savedand packed hersuitcaseandwentthoughtlessly.Upon leaving,shestared at her houseand begantoremember everything about when shelivedtherewith herparents, She tookahandkerchiefand begantocry . devastated,shebroke downand clutchingthehandkerchief very strongly,she turnedandwent.She,had to struggleto find a jobinthetrade,butherrequest wasdenied,.After twoyears,herparentsrealizedthatshehad grown up without their help.Thegirlwaslyingin hernewapartment,when she receiveda callfromher parents, andpickeduphier clothes and returned withthem.
Good composition Laia but 1)you made many errors with the pronouns, their, his ,her. 2) You don't use punctuation correctly. When you finish a sentence you should use a full stop and start the next sentence with a capital letter. Please check next time
Good composition Laia but
ResponderEliminar1)you made many errors with the pronouns, their, his ,her.
2) You don't use punctuation correctly. When you finish a sentence you should use a full stop and start the next sentence with a capital letter.
Please check next time