Taisha,decided toleavehomebecause herparentstreated her likea baby, they did not give her much freedom,or let her bringfriendshome.SHetold herproblemtosomefriends,Taishaignoredthemand decided toleave.Asher parentsdid notknowwhohadleft home,they decided togo to thepolice. Her parentsworriedfor her: Theycould notsleep,desperatelyseeking, They thoughtsomething badhad happened.Taisha saw her parentswere very concerned.Shedecided togo homeand toldthereasons why she hadleft homeand her parents saidthat they would let her gooutmore.
Monica I had to correct some things. Specially pronouns, his, heir, their. The story is ok
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